Sunday, February 24, 2013

Editing, Part 2

When writing my last blog entry about editing, I had an idea.  Last year, I worked on a manuscript.  Finishing it at 83,000 words, I edited, made changes and edited again.  I thought I was ready to submit. After making a list of agents, I sent it out.  A couple of requests for pages and one nice rejection from a well-respected agent where she told me to work on my showing vs. telling.  Next, I edited again trying to apply the changes.  After more submissions with no luck, I put it aside while I worked on another manuscript and then another.

This weekend, I got that manuscript out again and read it from start to finish without making any changes along the way.  I felt I started strong and ended strong, but the middle meandered and went off course a bit.  Immediately, I got out a notebook and jotted ideas for changes.  I'm going to rework it and try to improve upon it.

I hadn't read that particular manuscript in nearly a year and despite all the editing I'd done at the time, it wasn't good enough.  I can see that now but couldn't then.  In a way, it's disconcerting.  Do I put them all aside for several months to a year and then come back to them only to realize the changes that need to be done?  Or are some of those early manuscripts just practice?

I don't know the answer but I liked this particular one enough to take the time now and rework it.  Hopefully, it will be even better.

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